It's not bad
Although, personally, I thought the sound in the begging and around 13 seconds afterwards were tad bit annoying. Maybe shortening it or keeping melody a bit spaced out would improve it, but other than that, good job! Keep it up!
Your Compositions... Truly Amazing
I really enjoy the music and songs you write, and I've been listening to your pieces for quite some time. I believe this is the most touching and beautiful piece you've written so far, a masterpiece of your own. This music not only brings out the story of your close friend, but also brings out the stories of the one listening to it, that's what makes this song beautiful and truly touching. I will continue listen to your music, and thank you for posting all these wonderful pieces. -Sunai
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